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It's been a long-ass time since I've really written anything. Too long. I want/need to get back to doing it. One of my problems is I self-edit a lot, so much that often I don't complete something I've started because I'm never completely satisfied with my work. So I'm going to post some old stuff I've written, some have seen these and some have not. All criticism is welcomed but I'm especially interested in those for whom this stuff is new. Good, bad, whatever, let me know. And thanks in advance.